34.7 In the Dark
When the power went out, we built a big fireand covered the doorways with tacked sheets and huddled in the one room with a battery operated CD player playing Blonde on Blondeand ate vegetable soup...
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H---i like the narrative, the very nice last three lines.(as an exercise, what else beside make love might this couple do reflecting intimacy and tenderness?)bernie
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listening to the shattering music of ice. After their breathing grew heavy, you and I made loved in the quiet of our own dark light. But don't lose this great line: After their breathing grew heavy....
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After their breathing grew heavy, you and I moved to the quiet of our own dark light. ?
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Yes: listening to the shattering music of ice. This poem makes a girl wanna flip the fuse switch: "Gosh, darn it! Power's out again."
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